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I've been awoken,
from a long emotionless sleep.
A girl, a beautiful incredible girl
has set me back on the path to freedom.
She is here for me as I am for her,
I cry tears of bliss.
When we touch there is nothing else,
when we speak our ideas mingle
and when we're apart our love is still strong.

I've tasted freedom,
I"ve seen beauty incarnate,
I've heard the most incredible song,
I've touched you're soul,
                                    and
                                           I love you.
©2005-2009 ~bigjilmboognish
:iconbigjilmboognish:

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To my love.

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:iconredheadedromeo:
Colin you are amazing, that is terrific, I am experiencing the same thing, this thing called love. I couldnt have ever said it better. Amazing work.

--
"God is not outside us but is just us, the living and the dead, the never-lived and never-died." Kerouac

"The joy of being human is in uncovering the core we already are, the treasure buried in the ruin…" -Rumi
:iconbigjilmboognish:
Thanks a lot :)

--
“NAKED Lunch -- a frozen moment when everyone sees what is on the end of every fork.”
~William S. Burroughs
«Boognishes. We build smiles.»
:iconsammi-j:
absolutely beautiful...
fave...really...wow.

...i should get back in2 writing, your stuff is fantabulous.

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..:Love Lost is Love Gained:..
:iconpoopstick78:
wow that is freaking awesome!!!!!! thats an awesoem poem, i like it alot! awesoem work man!!!

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sweetness on a popsicle stick
:iconbigjilmboognish:
Thank you :):) You totally should write, it's nice to get emotions out a bit. And thanks for the fav!

--
“NAKED Lunch -- a frozen moment when everyone sees what is on the end of every fork.”
~William S. Burroughs
«Boognishes. We build smiles.»
:iconbigjilmboognish:
Thanks COdy :) I'm glad you like it.

--
“NAKED Lunch -- a frozen moment when everyone sees what is on the end of every fork.”
~William S. Burroughs
«Boognishes. We build smiles.»
:iconalatripp:
Awwww.

Pretty.

You make me happy when I read your poetry. :D

--
We have no scar to show for happiness. We learn so little from peace.
:iconbigjilmboognish:
Thanks :) Your comments make me happy!

--
“NAKED Lunch -- a frozen moment when everyone sees what is on the end of every fork.”
~William S. Burroughs
«Boognishes. We build smiles.»
:iconjnr0884:
Bravo, man. She'll love it. :)

--
There's high, and there's high, and to get really high--I mean so high that you can walk on the water, that high--that's where I'm goin - George Harrison

Oh, just click the link already.. ~jnr0884

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